By Jessie, January 10, 2019
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However, it would be much helpful if you can explain more and perhaps give me an example instead of just saying 'there are problems with your sentence structure here' or 'try to paraphrase'.

By Kelly, November 29, 2018
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I will work on planning my written pieces more before I start writing and work on my use of cohesive devices. Hopefully this will assist me to achieve higher task achievement and coherence and cohesion scores. 

By I-Man, October 30, 2018
Please correct me if I am wrong, I believe that when mentioning Philippines, an article 'The' is required to point out that the Philippines was formed by several islands. I am not sure why the examiner crossed out 'The'. 

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By WENJIE, September 12, 2018
There are some ponits confusing me: Like the sentence "I am writing this letter to ...". The similar sentece was used in my Writing 3 but critised in my Writing 4. To be specific, teacher told me to omit "this letter". Does it matter in my assignment? Thanks

By Andrea, September 09, 2018
Thanks I really appreciate your feedback . However, I have a small question when I start the the letter as Dear Mr Smith, there is a full stop after the Mr ?

Kind Regards,
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Hi there, 

I have received my feedback. However, I would like to know if there is any website that you would recommend in order to improve the mistakes I am making when writing. 

Kind Regards,
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Hi it would've been better if you pointed out my mistakes on my essays directyly. I want to know my mistakes kn the prepositions on task 2? And can you give  me an example on how I could use coordinating conjunctions on task 1? Thanks you

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Unfortunately, this is quite disappointing. It was the 4th feedback I got, and each time I could clearly see that each examiner has a different style. I can match them although it is anonymous. However, I would really appreciate if this certain examiner can give me more details and in-depth information so that it can be more helpful. (The first feedback I got was marvellous.) The comments I got today was comparably short and superficial. It would be great if there were more comments on the corrected essay. Also, if I can suggest something, it would be nice that students can also check who the examiner is, at least their nicknames. Thank you 

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By Lei, June 16, 2017
To whom it may concern,

I spend one week on practising my writing here at ExpressIELTS. Tomorrow I will take my last IELTS exam. According to all correction, suggestion and comments on my five essays, I have noticed all issues about why I am always staying at 6-6.5. Though I am not sure whether under an atmosphere of actual exam I can amend such errors and improve my writing or not, I will thank to all the help from examiners here. Thanks again to all you guys.

Best Regards,
Lei Zhang

By Lei, June 15, 2017
To whom it may concern,

I spend one week on practising my writing here at ExpressIELTS. Tomorrow I will take my last IELTS exam. According to all correction, suggestion and comments on my five essays, I have noticed all issues about why I am always staying at 6-6.5. Though I am not sure whether under an atmosphere of actual exam I can amend such errors and improve my writing or not, I will thank to all the help from examiners here. Thanks again to all you guys.

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 Good evening! Thank you so much your effective advice and I'm really sorry that I sent this message at the Friday's night. But let me ask you. I would like to check my sentence has wrong spells or not within it. So, if you are ok, please tell me how to check my paper that was already checked which had spells mistaken by you. 

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By Jessie, May 26, 2017
Thank you for your comment, but for some reason I can't check 'corrected essay' file. I would appreciate it if you can help me with this. 

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By Xun, May 03, 2017
Thanks for your feedback. By the way, if my argument is not commonly accepable, you can point it out and give me a better one. 

By Xun, April 18, 2017
I would like to suggest that if you find my argument is not very common or any logical issues in the eassy, you can point it out.

By Xun, April 02, 2017
very good comment, thank you so much. I got band 8 in writng, but i only 5.5 in speaking, really frustrated. 

By Xun, March 22, 2017
Thx for your professional feedback, but i have a couple of questions. Agree with vs Agree to, i have checked the dictionary. http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/agree Agree to sth means "to accept something", so can i write "I agree to the view under some circumstances". In my opinion, agree with should be used for somebody, i am not sure.  

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sorry, fulfill is for American English?

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It taught me a lot.
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By fatma, November 15, 2016
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By Jordan, November 13, 2016
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Thank you so much for your meticulous marking, which absolutely turned out to be beneficial to me. 

By the way, would you advise me more about how to distinguish between the formal format and the informal one? Also, is it possible to adopt a semi-formal format when writing a letter in ielts?

Looking forward to your kind reply.Thank you.

Jordan

By Zhiqiang, November 10, 2016
Thanks Cathy. I will pay more attention to using appropriate articles and collocations.

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By fatma, October 30, 2016
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By fatma, October 22, 2016
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By Romain, October 22, 2016
The feedback is very detailed as usual! Thank you
Just one thing, when i download the corrected essay, this is not mine that appears!!! Could you please solve this problem. Thank you

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By abril, September 22, 2016
Hi. This is very helpful. Thank you. However, i have 1 problem, the download corrected essays is on HTML. i am able to see it on my mac. any advice please.

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Regards,
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By AHMED M, August 29, 2016
Thank you very much indeed for your valuable feedback.

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By Shang, August 28, 2016
Thanks for your comments and I have a question.

If I don't have an opposite view, how to develop paragraph 3?
My idea was supporting the new laws in paragraph 2 then added a few more ideas in paragraph 3 to extend the topic a little more.

Any suggestion? Thanks.

Regards,
Chen Shang

By Romain, August 25, 2016
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Thanks

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By asma, August 18, 2016
Thank you for the feedback, but how can I improve my writing ?

By Romain, August 18, 2016
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By Jiayu, August 18, 2016
thank you for the feedback, I will  focus more on task one!

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By Jiayu, August 07, 2016
I will keep an eye on these problems, thank you very much!

By Arian , August 07, 2016
Hi there
I feel my first essay correction had been more thorough with details, I have no idea if you even have corrected my second page of tasks 2 or not! If yes where it's feedback?
I would like to know about the essay structure feedback as well as more explanation on your corrected sentences. For example not just try to find something else for this word or...
I sent you an email  which has been unreplied for some reasons.
Thanks

By Hasan , August 06, 2016
thank you .. will submit another essay later today.
Hasan

By Khalid, August 05, 2016
Thank you very much for the useful feedback 

By Mingu, August 02, 2016
Thank you for your kind feedback. Although I am a native speaker, my writing has not been my strength and this is a great opportunity for me to improve these skills. I made the science up for task 2 by the way lol.

By sarah, July 30, 2016
thank you for your input
unfortunately it is very difficult for me to increase my score up to a 7

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Hope I can get progress after practice more! 

By Khalid, July 26, 2016
Thank you for your helpful feedback. 
How can I jump from band 7 to band 8? 

By sarah, July 22, 2016
thank you , how much would i score on word count since i find it difficult to reach the required target

By Mohammed, July 13, 2016
Thanks for the correction speed, and all feedback.

By Khalid, July 11, 2016
Thank you very much for your efforts. 
Actually, I'm a little bit frustrated when it comes to task 1. I tried to do my best to group the information given on the graph and to use different vocabularies to compare data. Moreover, I get stuck and confused in the middle of the analysis and I usually run out of time.
Frankly speaking, Task 1 is so difficult.
I would appreciate your help on this aspect 

Kindest regards,  

By Ewelina, July 06, 2016
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By fatma, July 04, 2016
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By Khalid, July 02, 2016
Thank you very much for your feedback. 
Regarding task 1, I am still encountering difficulties and confusion when it comes to grouping the data for comparison. 
I would appreciate your help to conquer this problem. 

Regards,

By sahar, June 28, 2016
Thank you for your feedback which is help me a lot. Some time as you said I cant complete one sentence or one Idea with a clear outcome 

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By fatma, June 23, 2016
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By jomer, June 14, 2016
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By Romain, June 02, 2016
Thank you again! Great feedback!

By Romain, May 31, 2016
Great feedback as usual!

Just two questions if i get 7 for task 1 and 6.75 task 2, would i get 7 overall?
and
instead of "Both views of this debate will be covered in this essay", what should i write?

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By CHUN, May 29, 2016
OMG, thank you for checking my work thoroughly! 
A quick question, I'm not too sure about my current writing skills, do you think its accurate that the score 6 have been given for these two tasks? As I can see I've make quite a lot of mistakes ... I was running out of time, had to rush it a little.

Going to have my IELTS test next Saturday, do you think its possible to improve my writing to a solid band 6.5? As 6.5 is the minimum entry for the programme I'm applying.

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By kevin, May 27, 2016
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By rabindra, May 27, 2016
Hello

Thanks for providing me corrected essays and I am glad that I am on the way to 7.

But I couldn't find any suggestions in corrected essays for Task achievement and coherence and cohesion for task 2 as I just got 6 in each. It will be highly appreciated if you can provide me best answers for coherence and cohesion to score 7 in my essay task 2.

Regards

By kevin, May 24, 2016
Here is the situation, when I was taking the real test, even I did some proofreading I did not have enough time to fix them within two or three minutes. Another more important issue is the space between the last and next sentence must be suitable for adding some words or doing some adjustments. However, the adjustments normally affect the whole essay which could possibly leads to a lower score. Could you give me some suggestions?
 

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By Eva, May 06, 2016
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By Eva, April 30, 2016
I would appreciate more tips how to higher my score in lexical resources for both tasks . And some tips for  higher  score for task achievement in task 2. I keep having score 7 and dont know how to improve.

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By EUNJI, April 22, 2016
Dear

 I have a question.
As writing a flow chart, is it right that it writes  the passive form and verb is the present form?
add to another a question.
what is the different conjunction?
I want to know more conjunction.

Thanks

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I will submit more writing as well.


Thank you!

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I came back to study again for my next ielts since I didn't get the score I need for a bit. I will keep studying hard until I get the score I need.

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Hi,

Yes, I am practicing on the real IELTS answer sheet and I have been doing it with pen for the the last three writings. Before I was writing in a note book but I realize that the proper answer sheet was smaller so I had to write more words in every line :). I will have my IELTS next Saturday so I will try to write more this rest of the week. Thank you!!!!  

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By Shang, March 13, 2016
Thanks for the information.

I have a generic question:
Given the limited time, which area should I pay more attention to will more likely result in a quick improvement?

Regards,
Chen Shang

By Andrea, March 10, 2016
Hi, 

Thank you for your feedback, Some comments are repetitive but it is okay :), that help me to improve my writings. Thanks for the links I haven't check them but I'll do it today. 
I keep practicing, mostly in the task one that for me is the harder one.

I just have a question, can you please give me a feedback about the structure (mainly task 2) for example if my introductions are well written. Also whether the paragraphs are written in a logic way, whether they have main ideas and they are developed properly in the paragraph.
I would like to know if I can improve the structure of my writings.

Thank you

Andrea   

By Andrea, March 05, 2016
Thank you. I keep practicing

By Edita, March 04, 2016
Hi, 
thank you for your feedback. Now I know my weak points, I can work on them. Very helpful!

By Andrea, March 02, 2016
Thank you for the links you have sent me, I found them very useful. Any idea of how can I learn to use a variety of terms and phrases and   change a sentence? Maybe do you know a formula or a way to do it quickly during the test?.

I can see that this problem (mentioned above) is dragging my score down in lexical resource. But I haven't be able to improve it :(

Thank you very much for all your advice and help. :). I keep practicing.


By Andrea, February 19, 2016
Hi,

I really appreciate all your advises. Yes I have problems choosing the right word form :(. for correcting this I am writing over and over some words in many forms, I hope this works. 
Although my writings have improved in overall, I need to work on doing the tasks in less time and then having the chance to proofread it. I think, if I have time to proofread I could probably fix some mistakes. :). However, I am very happy because I can see that, with your recommendations and my effort I will get the band I need. 
I also decide to get another five more credits and keep practicing until I take the test. 

Thank you and talk to you soon :)
   
  

By Jake, February 17, 2016
Thank you so much. very useful tips!

By Andrea, February 12, 2016
Hello
I really appreciate your feedback since is greatly useful to improve my writing skills. I also saw that this time a got a better naked score for both tasks. Thanks to your advices :). However, for task 1 I do not understand why you said that I did not write a "conclusion" (I know for task 1 one must write an overview not a conclusion), which I wrote in my first paragraph just after the introduction. Please see bold words below.
 ?The bar graph illustrates, the number of students by gender, who navigate on internet at Redwood Secondary School over an eight-year period, 1995 to 2002. Overall it is noticeable that over the period as a whole the use of internet rose in both sexes.?
I have also read that is recommended that students put the overview at the beginning just in case they run out of time and do not do an overview at the end. 
Thank you again and looking forward to your comments  

By Andrea, February 09, 2016
Hi, 
Thank you very much for the feedback. This has been the best contribution I'd had to improve my writing skills.  Now I can focus on what I have to correct and I have a lot of work to do :). I really appreciate your help
Talk to you soon
Andrea

By Mahshad, February 05, 2016
Thank you very much, it was a thorough correction with very helpful comments. I wonder how I can ask my questions about the comments

By rajpreet, February 02, 2016
thanx a lot teacher , could u plz give me some links for good readings for task 1 and 2, and for use of connectors such as, although, however, while etc with examples. i will be thankful.
cheers
rajpreet

By Maria, January 30, 2016
Thank you so much for all tips ! It is really helpful :)

By Jake, January 20, 2016
Thanks for your comment! The previous ones were actually 2 hours job,I did not follow a time limit of 20 mins and 40mins. This one I took only 50 mins to finish off both task 1 and task 2. It seems not as good as previous essays.

I have registered another two exams in a row on Feb 18th and Feb 20th because haven't got my score last time. I have put my target score as 8 (7 is ok for me to get PR visa) because I want to get more motivation from the higher target. I will put more effort and have more practice in hand-writing and upload my hand writing jobs for the left credits.

Thank you so much again for your detailed feedback, very helpful. really appreciate.

cheers Jake


By rajpreet, January 19, 2016
Hi teacher, could u plz tell me that as word teachers is given in the question, then do i need to focus on just teachers throughout my response or is it ok if i do not mention it al all in my essay?  i was just confused about the question actually.
thanx for ur feedback.

By rajpreet, January 15, 2016
Hi teacher, coukd u plz give me some link for connectors in ielts task 1 ,2. for example, where to use however and whether with some details and examples of their use.
i will be thankful

By YAQIAN, January 14, 2016
it is better if you can give a good example of a good essay

By Shang, January 13, 2016
Thanks for the detailed comment!

My questions:

1. Task 1 point 5: I planned to have three things forming one subject, i.e. Fantastic food, lovely environment, especially an old friend to chat and laugh with, those 3 things should form one subject, followed by a clause, "all of which", is the grammar correct? Furthermore, my intention was though subject part 1 "food" and part 2 "environment" are important, part 3 "an old friend" is more important, which is why I used "especially". What is the best way to express this?

2. Task 1 point 13: I thought the clause "we could share our stories" didn't need an object, therefore used "when".

3. Task 1 point 22: two reasons I used "could": first, main clause used past tense verb, i.e. heard; second, possible but uncertain.

Regards,
Chen Shang

By Indra, January 12, 2016
Thank you for the feedback.this is great to buid up my confidence to see where I am and develope myself to the target.Will continue to use this site.

By Shang, January 10, 2016
Very detailed and constructive feedback!

I have two questions:
1. Can you indicate the "common words" that were used and also suggested "less common words"?
2. The "Send pdf to my email (with comment)" function in notableapp.com didn't work. I realised that it did not ask me to enter my email address. Can you help update my email there?

By Verton, January 06, 2016
thx a lot!

By Verton, January 05, 2016
thx!

By rajpreet, January 04, 2016
Hi teacher, could u plz give me some link for good readings .

By Otgonchimeg, January 03, 2016
I was pleased with essential comments and corrections on my mistakes. Thanks a lot.

By Jake, January 01, 2016
Thank a lot. The quizzes are really helpful.

By KAMALJIT, December 28, 2015
I loved the way i got thorough feedback. boosted up my confidence and showed me the way to improve my marks.

Thank you

By Jake, December 28, 2015
Hi Thanks again for your comments and advice, very helpful for me. :)

How many uncommon words do you reckon to use in task 2? around 5-10?

By Otgonchimeg, December 22, 2015
Very useful comments, I am satisfied. 

By muye , December 17, 2015
Hi Teacher,

Could you please just teach me how to write it when you want me to use another sentence.
Because I think I am out of words. But I'd like to know how to write it if you can just tell me this is a better way to say it.

Cheers.

By Jake, December 15, 2015
Thank you so much.

I have read through all corrections, very helpful for me. 

What score do you reckon this essay can get after the corrections done?

By muye , December 15, 2015
Thanks for your mark.

1. write reach the highest level intead of reach the largest next time.
2. write followed by a slight decrease or a slight a decrease took place in instead followed by a slight decrease took place in

3. students who study isntead of students study.
4. the beneftis it brings


By Otgonchimeg, December 11, 2015
Satisfied with the review and comments.

By Verton, December 10, 2015
Much appreciated! ty

By ANDREA, December 10, 2015
Thank you so much for this detailed feedback. Great quality and extremely timely, which is perfect for me as I am sitting my exam tomorrow morning. 
I will certainly review the points discussed above to make sure I ace my test. :)

By Jessica, December 08, 2015
Thank you for this feedback. It's interesting to understand the elements that constitute the scoring and also to see the mistakes I made.

By Otgonchimeg, December 05, 2015
I am satisfied with the feedback and comments. It was very helpful.

By Verton, December 02, 2015
thx a lot

By Verton, November 29, 2015
thx a lot , much appreciated

By muye , November 27, 2015
Hi, I remember last time you told me to write "looking at the detail" instead of "looking at the details", so I got confused this time. What is the difference between these two cases?

By Jianyang, November 27, 2015
Thanks for your comment at first. It makes me earn a lot, but some comment still confuse me. For example, in the conclusion part in of Task 2, you had told me that I had contradicted myself, but my opinion is surely that, I don't fully agree or disagree with this statement. How can I express this idea more exactly, and make it as a paragraph? Thanks a lots. 

 

By Selen , November 27, 2015
Thank you very much for your review.

By muye , November 25, 2015
Hi mate,

I am not sure about the underline arrow in task 1. Could you tell me what do you mean? Thanks.

By Verton, November 17, 2015
Hi Marian,thx for correcting my papers.  i have been told by many people that contractions can be used in writing task1 when the task is informal. i am a little bit confused here. what is your advice?

By Yucong, November 17, 2015
they are helpful and come into details.

By Verton, November 16, 2015
Thx very much, all your suggestions are very useful, i will keep them in mind. 

By Lee, November 16, 2015
Thank you for the feedback. I was not expecting 5 for some of the criteria in task 1. I think I should practise more on my weak skills. 

By Yucong, November 15, 2015
Helpful tips for my further practice

By Pamela, November 10, 2015
Thank you for the feedback, although I was not expecting 5 for some of the criteria in task 1. I would really like if you could give me more feedback about how to improve my sentences for task 1. 

Regards
Pamela Rodriguez

By muye , October 30, 2015
1. use becoming instead of remained when situation changed.
2. use in other words in task 2.

By muye , October 29, 2015
1. write 270 words in task 2.
2. the problem of animal experiments instead of the problem of animal experiment.

By muye , October 28, 2015
1. write looking at the detail, or specifically instead of put it in details.

2. write about 170 words in task one.

3. do not narrow the topic.
4. it is easy to imagine that

By Yang, October 23, 2015
Very helpful! 

By Lichuan, October 22, 2015
Thank you very much for the feed back! :)

I know that I have to describe the trend more in the task one analysis. I will work on that. 

I am also aware that I sometimes use the same word too frequently. I will try avoiding that as well.

Also my answers tend to be similar and I would like to explore other styles of IELTS writing. But my study resource is limited.

Could you recommend me some IELTS writing samples or websites that I can learn from?

Thank you!

By lovepreet, October 21, 2015
Thanks a lot sir.

By lovepreet, October 19, 2015
hello sir,

In real, i need six band. I tried ielts exam already for five times. But everytime i got 5.5 band in writing. It is very urgent this time to get 6 band. Please help me as much you can.

Thanks

By Laura Margarita, October 18, 2015
Hi There,

Thank you for you feedback. Much appreciated. I would like to know if the punctuation I am using is correct? Also, is it correct to use the word THE is this 2 cases?
The majority of THE community
The majority of THE society.
Also, which is the correct way,  The dollar rate IN the market or AT the market?
Thank you.

By Lichuan, October 02, 2015
Thank you so much for your feedback! And also thanks for the previous feedback as well.

I actually wrote the essays on a notebook using pencil at first and then typed my answers on the site because, like you said, the actual test will require writing.

Regarding test one, I have some problems about the use of the word 'figure'. I wonder what the plural form of the word is. Is it 'figures' or just 'figure', or does it differ according to different contexts?

By Lichuan, September 22, 2015
Thank you for the great insight.